Friday, August 6, 2021

we have learnt to descriptive language for alma

Alma had a big smile on her face ear to ear.

she was swinging  her arms side to side .

Alma was a happy little girl skipping down the street by herself.

Alma has a red nose like rudolph's nose.

 Her blue benny is as blue as the sky.
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2 comments:

  1. Mrs CostelloAugust 24, 2021 at 2:42 PM

    Hi Miro

    Hope you are all good in your bubble?

    I enjoyed reading your descriptive writing all about Alma. This is certainly an interesting video clip to watch. It starts off really happy and then I think it is quite sad at the end.
    I like that you have used some similies in your writing. You are as clever as a fox!!

    Well done Miro, keep up the great work. I look forward to reading some more of your work while you are learning from home during lockdown.

    Until next time

    Mrs Costello :)

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  2. Mr CookAugust 31, 2021 at 11:04 AM

    Good work, Miro. "As blue as the sky". Please write something about what you are doing today as well.

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